In the grand scheme of things you'll get a B+ just for effort. Where you actually lost everybody was on the particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more correct right here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did give good results. Your authoring can be incredibly powerful which is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can certainly notice a leaps in reason you make, I am not really convinced of how you seem to unite the points that make the actual conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your point but wish in the future you actually link the dots better.