In the awesome pattern of things you actually secure a B+ just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you confused everybody was first on your particulars. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, let me reveal to you what exactly did work. The authoring can be pretty convincing which is probably the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can certainly see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of exactly how you seem to connect your ideas which in turn produce the conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position but trust in the future you actually connect your facts better.