In the excellent scheme of things you'll get a B+ for hard work. Where you lost me was in your particulars. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate in this article. Having said that, let me tell you what did work. Your authoring can be incredibly powerful and that is most likely why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can easily see the leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not certain of just how you seem to unite the points which in turn produce your final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point but hope in the near future you connect the dots better.