In this excellent scheme of things you actually secure a B+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost us was first in the specifics. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more correct right here. Having said that, permit me tell you just what exactly did deliver the results. The text can be rather persuasive which is most likely why I am making the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can see the jumps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas which in turn produce the conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your position but hope in the future you actually connect the dots better.