Throughout the grand scheme of things you get an A+ for effort. Where exactly you confused me personally was first on your details. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more correct here. Having said that, let me inform you what exactly did work. Your writing is actually pretty engaging and this is possibly why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can easily see a jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily certain of how you appear to unite your points which in turn help to make the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however trust in the future you connect the dots much better.