Throughout the wonderful pattern of things you'll get a B- just for effort and hard work. Where you lost everybody was in the details. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me tell you just what did do the job. The text can be extremely persuasive which is probably why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can notice the leaps in reason you come up with, I am not really sure of exactly how you seem to unite the details that produce the conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your point but trust in the near future you link your facts better.