In the excellent scheme of things you'll get an A with regard to effort and hard work. Where you lost us was in your facts. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me say to you what did do the job. Your writing is highly persuasive which is most likely why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can easily see a jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you appear to unite your details which inturn help to make the actual conclusion. For now I will subscribe to your position but trust in the foreseeable future you link the dots better.