Throughout this wonderful scheme of things you actually secure an A+ just for effort. Exactly where you actually lost everybody was in all the details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true at this point. Having said that, allow me tell you precisely what did do the job. The text is certainly pretty engaging and this is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not sure of just how you seem to connect your details which inturn make your final result. For now I shall subscribe to your point but hope in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.