In this great scheme of things you actually receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where you lost everybody was first in the details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more true at this point. Having said that, let me say to you what did do the job. Your text is very convincing which is possibly why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can notice the leaps in reason you make, I am not really convinced of exactly how you seem to unite the details which produce the actual final result. For right now I will yield to your issue however trust in the near future you actually link the dots better.