Throughout the wonderful scheme of things you actually secure a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you confused everybody ended up being on all the specifics. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true here. Having said that, let me inform you what did give good results. Your authoring is certainly pretty engaging and this is probably why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily certain of exactly how you seem to unite your points which in turn help to make the conclusion. For the moment I will subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you actually connect the dots better.