In this grand scheme of things you'll get an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost me was first on all the specifics. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, permit me reveal to you precisely what did do the job. The writing can be extremely powerful and this is possibly the reason why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can certainly notice the jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily certain of just how you seem to connect the details that produce your conclusion. For now I shall yield to your issue but wish in the future you link the facts much better.