In this excellent design of things you actually get a B+ for effort and hard work. Exactly where you misplaced me personally was first in all the facts. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, let me tell you exactly what did deliver the results. Your writing can be highly persuasive and that is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can certainly see the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily certain of how you appear to connect the details that help to make the actual conclusion. For right now I shall subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you actually link your facts much better.