Throughout this wonderful pattern of things you get a B+ with regard to effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused everybody was in all the particulars. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true in this article. Having said that, allow me tell you what exactly did work. The text is definitely highly persuasive and this is most likely the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can certainly notice a leaps in logic you make, I am not sure of just how you seem to connect your points which in turn make your final result. For now I will yield to your issue but hope in the near future you actually connect your dots better.