Throughout the awesome scheme of things you secure an A+ for effort and hard work. Where you lost us ended up being in all the details. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more accurate here. Having said that, let me say to you just what exactly did work. The text is definitely really powerful and that is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, despite the fact that I can easily notice the jumps in reason you make, I am definitely not sure of exactly how you appear to unite your details which in turn help to make the actual conclusion. For right now I will yield to your position but hope in the future you actually link your dots much better.