In this awesome design of things you secure a B- just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused me was first on your specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more correct at this point. Having said that, permit me inform you exactly what did work. Your article (parts of it) is certainly incredibly engaging and this is probably why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can see a leaps in logic you make, I am not really certain of how you seem to connect your points which in turn help to make your conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however hope in the future you actually connect your facts much better.