In the grand scheme of things you get an A+ with regard to effort. Exactly where you actually confused everybody ended up being in your particulars. As people say, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be much more correct at this point. Having said that, let me tell you exactly what did give good results. The article (parts of it) can be very powerful and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily notice the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really certain of exactly how you seem to connect the details which in turn help to make your conclusion. For now I shall yield to your position however trust in the future you actually connect the dots much better.